So let's go!
YouTube:
"Dude this is really god damn cool :D" - Backo3456
"DUDE AWESOME" - TheLucciman
"Story line= epic
Animation= epic
Voice acting= epic
Loved it! Its a shame you don't have the time to expand the story into a series. :(" - ElCabron889
But it's ironic, because technology/entertainment let you create this video. ;)" - ColeTheComicGenius
"Great job man ˆˆ, loved it :) T" - TauriMovies
(oh my god. TauriMovies. <3 This guy is like a machinima celebrity.... and the guy I interviewed for my research :))
DeviantART:
" - Sir-JohnnyFacebook:
"Dude, that's actually, amazing." - ANONYMOUS FRIEND!
"I'm being honest here - even though it may not be perfect (and nothing is), it's one of most impressive pieces of work that I've seen recently " - cousin :')
" - cousin :')"Good work !!!" - ANOTHER ANONYMOUS FRIEND
Blog (the important stuff! :))
"Jacek,
Well done young padawan!! Excellent job! Nearing the end!" - Mr. Rawson
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I don't know if the story itself was original or not but it was wonderful and you retold the story beautifully. The plot was all there, organized with background,conflict and resolution.
The technology you used made your production look professional - no feeling of an amateur having done it. I liked how you zoomed in and out bringing the scenery and characters to the foreground and then opening up the scene to include background buildings and other characters.
Although animated,your characters responded physically to the mood expressed in the narration. The fluidity of movement also surprised and impressed me. The movements of the characters were smooth, agile and without any jerking, even when there were other characters interacting in the scene.
Colors are brillant and clear both in the scenery and in the costumes of the characters.
Overall, a fantastic project Jacek!" - Ms. Wolf
As I said, FANTASTIC feedback!
Let's see what I get on warcraftmovies and machinima.com!
Glad you're getting positive feedback :).
ReplyDeleteTry to think about how this will be used in your report ... perhaps you could follow up with some people and find out what PARTS they liked best, or what parts they thought needed improvement. Also, if they have never seen a Machinima before (Ms. Wolf), you might be able to ask what they thought about the genre. The phrase "substantive feedback" applies here ... you need feedback that you can USE. If you look at the comments above, how much can you actually USE? How much gives some possibility for analysis?
I'd suggest to form a list of questions, and maybe send a follow up email to those that already gave feedback? Try to form questions that will directly relate to your report: weaknesses, strengths, content, style, demographics, research, etc.
Of course feedback is positive ... you're project is awesome and you know it. Now the question is why? hahaha :)
:)
DeleteThanks Mr. Rawson! I will make sure to do so today then!
Ill skype up the two people that I know will actually reply (my friends are lazy :( )
And will make a little survey. Unfortunately saying "please leave constructive criticism" doesn't work as well as I hoped to...
Ah well, I'll gather responses that I could use, thanks for the hint!
Mr. Rawson, can the wriite up include pictures? Or is it just text?
DeleteThanks!